WALT:STRUCTURE OUR WRITING
for my writing I brain stormed ,structured ideas and wrote the paragraphs.
From my writing I learnt to structure it.
My planning was easy but the writing was quit hard.
The resources I used were revise and edit.
Please leave a kind and helpful comment.
Kia Ora Ronak,
ReplyDeleteThank you for taking the time out to describe yourself. Even though I know you, I was still able to picture you based on your description. I also dislike being bullied and teased, which is why I choose instead to be kind. Next time try following up the questions in your first paragraph with answers. For instance, what is your culture? And who are your whanau?
Ka pai Ronak!