Compare and contrast .

WALT: COMPARE AND CONTRAST.
I read the 2 books I needed to write the feeling in the stories on fidget spinner type of graph and then wrote about my life. I learned there are 4 types of contrasts .reading was quite hard but the writing was really easy.I used books, revise and edit to check if my writing was well done.
Thx for reading my work and pls leave a helpful and kind comment.
BY RONAK

WHO AM I

      WALT:STRUCTURE OUR WRITING

for my writing I brain stormed ,structured ideas and wrote the paragraphs.
From my writing I learnt to structure it.
My planning was easy but the writing was quit hard.
The resources I used were revise and edit.

Please leave a kind and helpful comment.

A mystery letter from hulk buster.:) WALT:write a letter using a characters description .

SUP Sushant,

I am in New York city near the statue of liberty  and it smells like pollution , I am in traffic for donald trump's  white house  at 6:pm  in the afternoon.  surprisingly I see hulk raging and smashing building’s and he is physically hurting people and the city looks ughs .I hear people screaming like hell and that makes me terrified ,now tell me why would an Avenger destroy the city,sure he’s angry but why?... .  I guess i have a secretive mission to complete so I can  be a life time avenger!...

Even though hulk is my friend ,when he is angry he looks ugly,his eyes are squishy and his mouth is like a screaming gorilla and one thing,he rage quits  like Godzilla  and I hate it,sorry was that a strong word I didn’t really mean to say it.the worst part about him is his  of his ripped pants so please come and help me or i will be a screaming girl running around the city chased by the hulk.

So please help me HELP ME  .

He is crazy I am telling you crazy…!

SMILE FROM: ronak :)


I first wrote a plan and then wrote it into sentences , after that I revised and edited it and then publish
I learned how to write a proper letter and use my vocabulary
the plan was a little hard but the writing was easy and the revise and edit was really hard

I  used a re-sourse called revise and edit and my plane that was really importent




please leave this a comment and somthing  helpful

MATARIKI

Matariki and what the Kite means to Maori

the kite is part of matariki that is why we use kites in matariki so invaders dont come and attack the villages and the kites are shaped of a dimond like a star.

We all know that in Matariki their are seven stars called the seven sisters. These are the things we already know: There is the moon and the sun in the matariki legends, Matariki is the Maori new year, the stars appear in June and disappear in May and the Matariki festival is every year.

by ronak.

This is for dear mum hope you like it

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