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Tuesday 25 July 2017

A mystery letter from hulk buster.:) WALT:write a letter using a characters description .

SUP Sushant,
I am in New York city near the statue of liberty  and it smells like pollution , I am in traffic for donald trump's  white house  at 6:pm  in the afternoon.  surprisingly I see hulk raging and smashing building’s and he is physically hurting people and the city looks ughs .I hear people screaming like hell and that makes me terrified ,now tell me why would an Avenger destroy the city,sure he’s angry but why?... .  I guess i have a secretive mission to complete so I can  be a life time avenger!...


Even though hulk is my friend ,when he is angry he looks ugly,his eyes are squishy and his mouth is like a screaming gorilla and one thing,he rage quits  like Godzilla  and I hate it,sorry was that a strong word I didn’t really mean to say it.the worst part about him is his  of his ripped pants so please come and help me or i will be a screaming girl running around the city chased by the hulk.
So please help me HELP ME  .
He is crazy I am telling you crazy…!

SMILE FROM: ronak :)


I first wrote a plan and then wrote it into sentences , after that I revised and edited it and then publish
I learned how to write a proper letter and use my vocabulary
the plan was a little hard but the writing was easy and the revise and edit was really hard



I  used a re-sourse called revise and edit and my plane that was really importent




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