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Wednesday 22 November 2017

WALT:tell our challenge's

I structured my writing and wrote my paragraphs. I LEARNT THAT MY GOAL WAS TO BA SOCCER PLAYER.PLANNING WAS REALLY HARD BUT WRITING WAS EASY.
I USED EDIT CARDS TO EDIT MY WORK.PLS LEAVE A HELPFULL AND KIND COMMENT.THX

Monday 20 November 2017

Compare and contrast .



WALT: COMPARE AND CONTRAST.
I read the 2 books I needed to write the feeling in the stories on fidget spinner type of graph and then wrote about my life. I learned there are 4 types of contrasts .reading was quite hard but the writing was really easy.I used books, revise and edit to check if my writing was well done.
Thx for reading my work and pls leave a helpful and kind comment.
BY RONAK



Tuesday 7 November 2017

WHO AM I

      WALT:STRUCTURE OUR WRITING

for my writing I brain stormed ,structured ideas and wrote the paragraphs.
From my writing I learnt to structure it.
My planning was easy but the writing was quit hard.
The resources I used were revise and edit.

Please leave a kind and helpful comment.